Black Poetry : Soulmate

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  1. Teena

    Teena Member MEMBER

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    Love is having a soulmate...

    ... And telling the whole world


    Soulmate is his name
    He turned my flicker into a flame

    From out of my prayers he appeared
    Sent like a messenger to ease all my fears

    When the cares of this world seems too much for me to bare
    On him I can call, in day or rainfall, I know he'll always be there

    There to give me encouragement, to build my self-esteem
    Makes my whole life seem brand new, almost like a dream

    Never a cross word, not callous or unkind
    Always lifting up my spirits keeping my best interest in mind

    Showing me that a real man is honest, faithful and true
    Even when I thought no one, GOD says there's still a few

    You're showing me how to love without worries, without cares
    To never give up hope and know that GOD still answers prayers

    No wonder you're my soulmate sent from up above
    For me to share my every thought with my one truelove

    From the day I met you our souls were intertwined
    interlaced, interlocked, the two became combined

    The paths of our lives are different like the moon is from the stars
    Wanting to feel your every heartbeat, I can only admire you from afar

    But for all that you have given me how could I ever repay
    But to give you a part; no, all of my heart each and everyday
     
  2. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    S:heart:ulmate; Kindred spirit; Distant lover; whichever way you dress it up, tis spledind to be fortunate enough to experience that which is hard to come by... true and passionate luv:spinstar:

    :hearts4:

    :picture:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome Teena to destee.com
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love

    truely this was compassion and heartfelt soulmates are unique
    what u scribe is true love deep ...flow head and welcome within
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Teena,
    It's wonderful having you with us (family).
    Soulmates are the other half of our souls, I can surely relate to this piece. Great piece poet.
     
  5. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well Said & Well Written. I'd have to agree there's no mate like a soulmate.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Finding the person who is so right for you, yes, a soulmate. What a lovely piece. It was nice meeting you in chat, hope you'll return.
     
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    hi Teena
    Wow, this is a love given to the fullest
    and from the prayer you have shared with US
    the feel is fantastic. The mixing of souls
    can be ever lasting..much love

    Peace & Love
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!!
    I'm at a lost for words.
    This is so beautiful.
     
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    robboy2003 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    From your pen sweet words flow. Talking about love, so we all know.

    Great Drop!:welldone:
     
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