Black Poetry : Soulmate

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she's got this kind of poise
    that sits in her sexy voice
    every word digs a hole
    deep down into my soul
    i wish i had enough courage
    to tell her i truly worship
    her
    her conversation never gets old
    and every secret is never told
    she brings me peace of mind
    and comfort to my life
    sometimes i get bold enough to tell her about the effect
    and she fills me up, when im empty and have nothing left
    she brings a smile to my face
    with her sophisticated grace
    her maturity forces me to respect her opinion
    and she's educated and life driven
    sometimes i wish i held her ambition
    and it hurts to know that i can't have her based on our living conditions
    these days pass by and the months eventually fly
    i know she completes my expectations that are evidently high
    i constantly compare the beauty of her personality to others
    knowing that no matter how high or low i search, there isnt another
    she's touched every nerve as well as every emotion
    but what is love, if you never face any problems or cause any commotion?
    as soon as i met her, thats when i knew this place wasn't for me
    all these people i have met since her, do not mean nothin to me
    because while they've been mistreating me, she's trying to prove herself
    and this whole time i was blinded by lust and placed her high on the shelf
    i practice telling her, but i can never find it in me to let her know
    that i honestly think she is my soulmate...
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful
    it could be
    like the feeling
    of your poem
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' yes this was awesomely pose'd
    made me feel the depth of it
     
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    love is so purrrrrrtyful especially when u scribe it :)
     
  5. poeticlyspeakin

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    lol thanks yall...
     
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    I know exactly how this feels.......to find your soulmate...but can't
    have them. It's funny, I've heard so many times that you only
    meet your soul mate...that most sm's are never really together...
    I hope this isn't true............

    I really loved this piece, you know me... always drowning in anything
    that has to do with love.

    Very well expressed!
     
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    Glad you got that out of your system, dear one. Nice flow.
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis- thanks, i wouldnt get up from the comp until i did get it out of my system, it was driving me crazy...

    Angelicsage- i hope that isnt true and im always drowning in something about love also, its a beautiful thing, thanks for reading and replying, much love...
     
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    i likes
    perfectly written
    much respect j.
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks jazz4u...
     
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