Black Poetry : Soulmate vows

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are me
    And I am you
    We no longer are we
    But one instead of two

    When you hurt
    I cry with you
    For I feel your pain

    When you're happy
    I rejoice with you
    For i feel your joy

    When we fight
    It tears me apart
    For its like stabbing the mirror
    Cause you're a reflection of me

    When we make love
    Its like your soul travels through mine
    And it feels like we are locked in time
    Joined with no begiinning or ending

    Till the very trumpets sound
    I plan for our love to abound
    And even still i'll follow you to the pearly gates
    For I vow we are eternally united as soulmates
     
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    Just as soulmates should be, joined eternally. Such a lovely flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this touched me deeply this all i wish for !
    A true soulmate
     
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    WOW............to find a soulmate is a wonderful Blessing

    great flow
     
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    Hey asimplepoet
    This is a very beautiful poem
    so touching and deep.
    Yes indeed! Looking
    forward to reading more

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Aren't we all looking for soul mates? Such a beautiful depiction of what it should be like! Loved this!
     
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    A simple poet indeed
    Simply poetic it was
    Beautiful scribe my brother
    Continue to Bless with Beauty
     
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    man, poet!
    this one choked me up, now!, when it rains it pours...
    I got say much love on this one...
    too many memories, i feel the heart in you.
    very lovely.
    Desert Storm
     
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    There is a whole to this... soulmate

    love lyric
     
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