Black Poetry : ~Soulless To You~

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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was told...
    it didnt make sense for one
    to have a soul...
    if he didnt believe in a
    creator...
    so i was
    told...

    then away with
    my morals...
    my emotional and
    intellectual nature...
    for those elements were my
    soul's creator(maker?)...
    now the most essential part of me
    is no more...now labeled
    suprious...
    to a person whom hasnt quite found
    himself yet...
    i hold an ill will to
    those...
    who try to criticize how i
    tend to grow...
    for we walk on
    different roads...
    we may go through
    similar struggles...
    but in the end my curves will always be sharper
    than yours...
    squeeze into my
    weary shoes...
    and see if it's an easy
    walk through....a mile later
    until then i'll be Mind
    Soulless to you...
    never again shall i be the stock
    of your ridicule....
    venting lane...



    Continued...
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

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    oh i like this cant wait for the rest...
    nice veryy nice flow...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe bring on the rest
    lovin it ....whoaaaaaaa!
     
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    feeling the power in your flow
    nice piece Mind~$oul
    Peace
     
  5. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love

    uppin one last time
     
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    Virgil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I kinda know where you're coming from. Good stuff. I wanna see the rest of this, and hope you go even further with it.
     
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