Black Poetry : ~Soulless To You: Torn Remorse~

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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A keystyle


    To hurt another heart
    was only healing
    for me...
    the gift was to make love
    to them until
    they fell for me...my sandy brown eyes
    hiding behind
    soaken ebony...
    a slick tongue i stole from
    an absent daddy...
    had them eatin out of the palm of my hands
    if i saw it necessary...
    had them screamin my name, while their nails
    dug into my back for comfort
    and security....
    and when i lost desire
    had them on
    bloody knees...
    begging for my mercy...
    i held it in my hands
    and waved it in their face for
    a tease...
    the curse came once i found
    it addicting...
    to ruin a heart so
    lustfully...
    i begun to question
    my humanity...
    luckily shyness started to
    overwhelm me...
    but the hatred still lurked around
    inside of me...so i continued
    to play with minds
    and torture hearts
    out of pain...
    because of a memory i can see so clearly
    just as it's first day...
    yeah it's his blood, and i'm becoming acquainted
    with his cowardly ways...
    laughin now when the deed
    is done...cryin later
    when haunting memories
    come...
    i'm trapped between self hatred
    and remorse....
    but love myself even more...with the thought of each
    heart i've torn....startin to lose faith
    in these words...
    my words..
    then she came to me
    no longer was
    there a curse...no longer was i soulless
    she saw a heart, and it belong
    to her....



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  2. icandi

    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is truly a very deep poem. Never stop flowing
     
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    deep
    well put together too
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe nice drop
    deep emotions flowin
    her heart.......wow!!!
     
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    Feeling your flow, keep it coming!
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice ride..........ty 4 the read.
     
  7. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love

    last up
     
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