Spoken Word : Soulicious

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  1. OldSoul

    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Soulicious

    You are succulent and tender
    Your softness smoothericious
    Touching you is so delightful
    Feeling you is so insightful
    You are past deliciousness
    My taste buds jump in joy
    My mouth anticipates your coming
    As we succeed in going
    To a whole nother dimension.
    So rare is this
    Subtomic kiss
    Some lips would miss
    Its gentleness
    And then dismiss
    Its power.
    I therefore see
    For you and me
    A burst of pleasurether
    To soar our hearts to Ebonhood
    Where we can be Soulicious.


    --©12/15/06--
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    look out now Oldsoul this one was lace'd with some sensual treats
    sounds really great bruh !
     
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    Such passion in this sultry piece. And your delivery, as you would say, outstanding.
     
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    very smooth Brotha Oldsoul rolls right off the lips
    quite an intellectual seductive tool
    flow on
     
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    Wow! oldsoul
    this poem was indeed spices.
    yeah. I have to come to open mic and here
    you drop this pieces my brother

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hot drop poet ...Souliciously moving!!
     
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    My favorite lines are
    "So rare is this
    Subtomic kiss
    Some lips would miss
    Its gentleness
    And then dismiss
    Its power."

    Yes this is a very smooth and senual piece. Loved it
     
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    Soulilicious!!!!!!!

    Oh My Goodness
    I do not know how to tell you how much this was tickled my goodness :)
    Splendiferously Magnificacious!!!!!!!
    Old Soul
    I want to be able to write like you when I grow up:)
    I really like this Poetication
    Snaptations to you!!!!!

    :10200:
     
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    Yeah let me get a ticket to Ebonhood first class. This is tigt Old Soul a real throwback on how love should be!
     
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    Right across the floor