Quiet Poetry Lounge : Soulful Climb

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DigginThaShyne, Jun 29, 2001.

  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're getting closer,
    To reaching the summit of that steeper inclination,
    At whose peak,
    There lies a deeper invitation,
    Inside yourself,
    The feeling...ooh, like solid breaths,
    To drowning men,
    A sustaining air within,
    That's got you gloriously inclined,
    Cloud nine and feeling fine,

    Because you're closer, closer,
    To your sought after goal,
    Repiecing together the elements
    That meliorate your soul,
    And on the whole, You feel sublime

    As time goes by, the distance, less.....

    You're getting closer....closer...closer..closer.closer to happiness
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    loving

    your feel good work here

    a very pleasant piece of work


    can't tell you it's bad when i know it's good

    Peace Tar
     
  3. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks, Street. I appreciate the love...and I've read some of your work, and yours is good as well. I guess game recognizes game...lol...and yours is also tight!
     
  4. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tarheel, i'm lovin' this piece. it's quite enjoyable. keep on scribin', friend.

    ~~~inkdrops~~~
     
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