Black Poetry : SOUL2PAPER

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by black_soul, Feb 8, 2006.

  1. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Out of my soul into my mind thoughts running clear
    Things on my mind can’t find a listening ear

    So from my mind down my arm with a pen in my grip
    I get this ink to speak for me so I don’t move my lips

    This paper makes this pen bleed like it cut my soul
    As the words form begin to see the form of my soul

    I tell my thoughts to this paper cause it doesn’t judge just listens
    Never throws anything back in my face no matter the condition

    So from my soul to my mind to my pen to this pad
    I talk about all these feeling I had happy or sad who else gonna listen when I feel so **** bad

    Lips hold back but this pen goes full blast
    This ink gets the first word second and last

    So I write this pain, anger, sometimes joy
    From first page to last read how a man came from a boy

    Cause the road was hard each page is a street sign
    Don’t want to go back so I look at the pages and remind

    So I remind my mind of a place and time where I made mistakes filled with anger and hate
    At this rate you might read this book and put my sanity up for debate

    This paper holds no punches everything at full swing
    You just gotta understand the peace of mind this brings

    So I write as I fight till someone ring the bell
    Cause it only matters to me if I win or fail

    So I write this soul to paper till I’m on my last breath
    Cause when this life is over my soul goes home this paper will be all that is left

    Still Standing
    BlackSoul
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was madd hot poet
    Im loving this drop for real
    Dam the meaning was so real
    Poetry in motion Much Love
     
  3. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR THE SUPPORT
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blacksoul you are very talented and gifted. i love the real emotion in this. i cant even touch it can you believe it. keep them flows coming ok. ok.:hearts1: :hearts1: :hearts1: :heart: :great:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this peice spoke to me and i hear u
    with thy ear ...tyte drop ya pen was speaking here.
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I saw the title and said "Igottareaddat"
    Glad I did!!!!!!

    VERY VERY Good.

    You summed up what poetry is all about
    EXPRESSION,
    Great job poet!

    Peace and Love
    twision
     
  7. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brotha u were on point with this scribe, the relationship with a writer and their pen and paper is like art...no judgement, just peace, and freedom...

    Loved this vibe...keep the flow goin

    Word from MzSoulll aka...
     
  8. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very imaginative and well written piece!:heart:
     
  9. mz_phi1

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    :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: That was great.....I had to read it twice,
     
  10. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey rich, nevar,twision,mz phi1, prizefighter16, and cursed heart thank you for the love your showing this