Black Poetry : Soul Tied

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  1. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My soul is
    crying~
    feels like I`m
    dying~
    internally
    feeling distraught and
    lonely~
    emotionally
    cause...
    I miss you

    I don`t know why cause
    we`ve never met
    except through notes on the
    internet

    Few conversations on the
    phone
    misery strikes like
    lightening at night when...
    I`m all alone

    Yearning to hear your voice
    sexy accent spilling words of
    culture~
    love~
    spirituality~
    wisdom
    sexuality~
    stroking my
    mentality~
    lovingly and
    affectionately
    pouring deep into my soul

    At night when I find I`m
    cold I...
    press replay and replay the sound
    of your voice in my ear
    laughing~
    sharing~
    cursing~
    cohersing~
    mesmerizing~
    ME

    I miss you...
    When will you become my
    Reality?


    (c)2001EssenceofAminata all rights reserved
     
  2. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AFRI

    TIGHT WELL PUT MESSAGE TO A PROSPECTIVE SOULMATE...I PRAY 4 U IT IS ALL U SEEK. EXCELLENT PORTRAYAL

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ah-me-na-tah,

    this queen is "outstanding." I swear since I've been blessed to encounter you, your scribe has grown into "some kind of wonderful." Thank you for blessing me with your presence. We gone keep in touch.

    One love, blak
     
  4. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks guys!

    blak "some kind of wonderful eh?" :blush:

    gypsy I'm praying also...
    thanks for the read:)
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri.


    ...how da hell did i miss this??!!

    it's beautiful! & i mean it! i could feel each
    & every line of this piece... i love it!! :)

    AlwaysPeace.
    SunShyne~
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri,

    Looks like I missed it also. Very emotional. I'm feeling the flo of this.

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri

    You really laid it down wit this one hea! Dig Dat!

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
  8. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You sure did...

    ...lay it down with
    this one, girlie. Simply
    excellent. I can definitely
    relate to that "I miss
    you" feeling...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    humm!!

    to da max well said u painted a picture perfect
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Afri

    this is that stuff girl

    i lovedided the way you laid this girl

    loving your flow
    but that's nothing you didn't already know

    DSS
     
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