Black Poetry : Soul Tied (reminiscing)

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  1. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My soul is
    crying~
    feels like I`m
    dying~
    internally
    feeling distraught and
    lonely~
    emotionally
    cause...
    I miss you

    I don`t know why cause
    we`ve never met
    except through notes on the
    internet

    Few conversations on the
    phone
    misery strikes like
    lightening at night when...
    I`m all alone

    Yearning to hear your voice
    sexy accent spilling words of
    culture~
    love~
    spirituality~
    wisdom
    sexuality~
    stroking my
    mentality~
    lovingly and
    affectionately
    pouring deep into my soul
    nurturing with liquid love

    At night when I find I`m
    cold I...
    press replay and replay the sound
    of your voice in my ear
    laughing~
    sharing~
    cursing~
    cohersing~
    mesmerizing~
    warming~
    ME

    I miss you...
    When will you become my
    Reality?

    (c)2001EssenceofAminata all rights reserved
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri...

    Exceptional writing here my sistah!!! Feelin' ya soul tightenin' most def!!!

    Reality is just around that mental bend!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  3. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey GQ~
    You know I loves ya right??? Wanna b ma soul tie?

    and just between you and me...that ain't all that's tightenin' round hea!!!lol
     
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    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm diggin this one

    very, very tender...brimming with that raw edge of desire!

    Thank you sweet poetess :)

    saleem
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AFRI...

    this is exceptional sister dear!

    i can relate... COMPLETELY!!!
    umm hmmm... dats ryght... :)

    Peace&Love...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    what does Jama mean ???

    maan, ery'body got them some
    internet crush goin on ---
    you, stargoddess and Hyper , and Ga's secret thang -
    I wonder if I do ??
    anyway , this was personal --
    you seem to be very un-disclosed when you write,
    that's live !!! honesty is the Only policy.
     
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    "pouring deep into my soul", girl.... now that's tight!!
    feelin ya....

    8th!
     
  8. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love y'all!!

    8th~
    Sis, I am glad you feel me.:)

    Hypnotize~
    Honey, yes this was personal! I really don't have a crush anymore. I believe that my "crush" has interests elsewhere. And that's okay.
    Although most people would say that I'm putting myself "out there" I'd rather be honest in the beginning, than to have to explain myself about this thing or the other later. Know what I mean?;)

    Sunshyne~
    Uummmm hmmmm gyrl, I can relate too! You betta work ya ting out gal!!!;)

    Saleem~
    Appreciate the love sweetie!!
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri revisited...

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  10. adefinitediva

    adefinitediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Afri,
    This is definitely of the chain.
    Thanks for the vibe; I really
    can relate . . . honestly!:smile:
     
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