Black Poetry : soul tie broken

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  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    where there was once a yearning
    there is now a void
    where there was once confusion
    there is now order
    where there was once lust
    it has now been tempered

    gone
    taken away
    purity in it's place
    visuals sometimes make a mental appearance
    but they are quickly banished
    no longer in bondage
    to that which i desired
    a soul-tie broken

    i cannot second guess
    things that are bigger than me
    i only know that i said a prayer
    and that prayer was granted
    soul-tie broken
    facing the reality of what is
    with all of it's flaws
    it's tight, but it's right
    soul-tie broken
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my i feel u on this drop here
    soul-tie broken
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this flow
    feelin it
    nice drop

    Angel
     
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    I've only heard this term used religiously
    but it's very true...but no matter it's power
    it's not greater than "deliverance"
    the prayers of the righteous availeth...
    you've been blessed...
    stay free...
     
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    Feeling the truth in whatever is, and being ok with that...liked the ease and flow of this.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm

    gone...
    broken...
    tossed away
    like the days of yesterday
    when the winds blew
    and the green grasses swayed
    with the love we made
    before soul ties were broken
    left me choking
    on remnants of yesterday
    and the things you say.:(

    soul ties

    hmmm.
     
  7. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad to know that you all are feeling and can relate to this write!
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this piece really touched me because i know exactly what you're talking about...and i mean a soul-tie can be to anyone that you don't need or anything. so i'm truelly feeling you. much love to you!
     
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    thank you for expressing what I am feeling!
     
  10. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cojamalik - thank you for replying and relating to this piece!
     
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