Black Poetry : SOUL-stice (S squared)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jul 4, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let's
    give birth 2
    each other during our
    SOUL-stice
    fuse our bodies into 1
    and ignore the world's
    existence

    the SUN will orbit us/become envioUS
    of our axis


    our temperature will melt unseen
    stars that hide behind the day
    and fill love's river with the rain...

    flowing 2 OVERflowing

    the MOON will bow to us/sing
    sensuous/ on the wind and
    we'll dance in total darkness
    to perfection.....

    .........................silence

    unbroken by sound
    drapes us in the rhythmic heartbeat of
    unborn passages that tongues
    hold close
    so thoughts are not conceived
    prematurely.......

    so we conversate with
    tactile sensations and roam
    upon each other body to body
    before
    ..........we release ourselves
    to rise over the horizon
    and embrace a virgin
    morning.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YESS!

    MAN HOW U CAPTURE THE GLOW
    OF LOVE IN SUCH A MOOD SWING
    VERB YA DA MAN!!:toast:
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww YES, but

    This be tight -- Blakman!!


    Perhaps - we can make
    "dew" ...
    in the wake of
    Sunday morning's wet-ness
    a two-bodied berry-shine without the
    effort of the sun's rays
    or its daily devotional sermon

    ....Maybe?

    Can we observe
    each other's AxiStence
    beyond the 70th parallel
    and take slow sips of each others'
    mental beverages -- D'licious
    and warm as
    the heat's intensity
    rises --

    Distinguish moisture
    whipped kisses by polarizing
    completely unified bodies
    underneath the crystals
    of the moon's
    -- nite-light

    .... Maybe?

    Shall our minds order a
    matrix so that all nonzero
    elements occur on the
    diagonal left of your facial smile
    to the lower right of my
    C.L.I.T.O.R.I.A.L grin ~

    -- cum again?! --

    joining these to vertices of
    bodily polydrons
    that are not of the same face
    in order to outline a relationship's
    beginning stage
    and final passage

    Perhaps ~~we can create
    the meiosis of a new
    kind of love - measured
    by the upward motion
    of a diapason sundial
    as you pass
    through the center
    of my cerebral sphere
    effortlessly illuminating
    inner ~SOUL~ peace
    leaving traces of
    your body's movements
    upon my own to
    be studied
    for all eternity
     
  4. MoEffective

    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WONDERFUL

    TIGHT WORK.

    FEELIN THIS PIECE ON OTHER
    HEMESPHIRICAL PLAINS........

    KEEP THE FLOW GROWIN
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL BLak-NeSs...


    can you say.... MaGnIfiCeNt? :)

    'cause dats what dis was.

    OneLuv.
    Queen Ga~ :wink:
     
  6. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS IS THE JOYNT

    ANOTHER FACET OF YOUR VERSATILITY IS REVEALED HERE MY FRIEND..THIS IS ..PURE ELEVATION.

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Ya know

    :D i loved the lighter side of Verb

    feeling your art man

    and loving it

    signed: Your Fan
     
  8. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep

    profound as always...
    i love the way you flow
    into my mental
    painting pictures never
    before conceived...
    you move me.
    -7:spinstar:
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb

    been missin you fo sho and now I know why. even though you drooled on ma pillow that's cool. we folks. I would love to embrace a virgin mornin while sippin on green tea and having wonderful thoughts of utopia.


    One
     
  10. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Soulstice

    A wonderful play on words that has a reason behind it --well done.

    Amun-Ra
     
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