Quiet Poetry Lounge : Soul Sister

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by skalion, Apr 13, 2004.

  1. skalion

    skalion Active Member MEMBER

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    It was cold outside
    And the vibe wasn’t feeling
    All that right
    Then an essence of divine
    Beauty came to the door,
    Her spirit extinguishing thoughts
    Of anxiety
    Her ever-graceful aura giving
    Off an unusual glow

    Upon entering my heart warmed
    Elements of culture found,
    The music of my people
    Electrifying the atmosphere,
    Artistry, heritage, laughter all around,
    Incense, and cheeba burning,
    No ******* or ****** to be found
    The mood of the moment
    Was right

    Conversations of life on a deeper
    Level flowed
    Poetic thought exchanged
    Every soul present connected
    In spirit
    So groove Soul Sister, groove
    Show that love can be made
    Without lustful intent,
    Without ever becoming physical

    © 2001 A. Hansen
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was deep I really like this it grabbed my attention and wouldn't give it back :laugh:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You created a scene where the vibe was just soulful, I liked this scribe.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flow head ya on a roll i see very nice scribing poet
     
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    Woo! Skalion!
    I felt the spirit
    talkin in this piece!
    That message
    went straight
    to the soul!
    Loved it!
     
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