Black Poetry : ~Soul Seduction~

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  1. Yemoja'sGoddess

    Yemoja'sGoddess Banned

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    Removed by choice, thank u for your interest and comments
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like a slow caress, methodically executed, this seduction was smoothly scribed, poetess. Masterfully done...wow!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    wow this was so hot

    YG yes i love the love the anticipation of love here

    and i'm not touching the climax part

    lol

    you know i had to go there

    hahahhahahahahahahaa

    but don't let my comment take away

    from this brilliant piece you wrote

    i like

    i like
     
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    Steaming up the house ...whew
    Hot and spicy piece poet ...I sure hear ya
    keep it comming ...^5
     
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    was my favorite part flow on poetress I enjoyed this drop!
    Much love!
     
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    I guess you can say

    i'm a bit warm poet....
    loving it!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwww ! this had me taken in and yep hot ! drop poetess
     
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    Yemoja

    Hi,
    this is an exhilarating piece with punctuation and climatic ecstasy. you are a passionate person and you can make a man explode.
    i hope he's got some gunpowder, hahahahahaha!
    this that fiyah for real, tho shawty
    you spit that ether
    hugs, rubs, kisses and soft touches


    Shuga Shane:couple:
     
  9. Yemoja'sGoddess

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    Thanks so much Fam,:qqb015: believe it or not, this was a freestyle... My imagination, a very wild:qqb019: ... but good thing, lol.:qqb023: Glad u enjoyed, turn it around and make it work for u..., u know, if u like...:qqb003:
     
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    Yemoja'sGoddess:
    This is the first time I have had the pleasure of reading you.
    This piece brings so much to the table, on the table, under the table...lol
    But seriously, this is passion, sensuality, and erotica at is best, tastefully.
    YES, I so enjoyed the read. You are now on my must read list.


    Much Luv
     
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