Black Poetry : Soul searching…

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  1. PloeMorphic

    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Soul searching like that oH searching for her soul in that street corner named SoHo
    Her blak hole is wanting, wishing, searching recklessly for her other half
    Lasting from seconds to minutes
    Halves undergoing multiplication by dividing her soul as minutes became hours
    Time passes her by…
    She still soul searching questioning the OH in SoHO
    Wishing the creator never separated her phallic part
    She is soul searching as she moves
    Swaying and mastering the strategic ways of Sheba
    She is a soul still looking for her whole
    In a street corner name SoHo

    Spoken Wordz via Pleomorphic
    Bless
     
  2. PloeMorphic

    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bawoni!!! Ola peace and blessings. THanks for the love.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Swaying and mastering the strategic ways of Sheba "

    would have loved to hear this live and in person :)
     
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    nice flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all i love dis scribe it flowed sweetly
    dis was tyteeeeeeeeee
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Intriguing and full of imagery!

    I notice you write with a lot of symbolism, some times I study your poems , yes occassionally I go back to my dictionary and I am a professional writer...it's the tools of the trade for every word that I search deeper meaning for I find new and innovative connotations that I just fall into all the mechanics as well as the esoteric beauty of your work it's like a fine piece of art .
    Blessings On Your House!
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep...much love for this.
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayumm brooklyn..this was deep.....i like pieces like that....i gotta peep some more of your work ....leep scribing phloe.....
     
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    nice flow.:)
     
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    This was vivid!!! I LIKE!
     
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