Black Poetry : Soul Scraping!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ouch he replied as his lover told him of his indescretion.
    Waiting for a true confession that was not about to come.
    ****, cried the sista who's man said he couldn't commit
    cause he couldn't take no more of her ****!
    Soul scraping though irritating and painful, sometimes
    disdainful always distasteful.
    For this procedure I am always grateful.

    Necrosis, "dying", the dead stuff has to be removed
    for the living to survive.
    Ouch said the politician who was told to resign his
    position. Can we do a petition! Hell no! We don't
    think so, it is time for you to go.
    Soul scraping always painful, mostly necessary!
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    "Baby I got something to tell you I hope you understand!"
    "I really prefer to be with another woman, I don't want
    no man! **** said the man, "Yes you can" and you will
    be a mother to this child! No more running the street and
    acting wild! Ouch! You just found out ya girl is more man
    than woman, and how did you miss it.
    **** you sho did kiss it!
    Ouch, soul scraping down to the naked truth.
    For liars and idolators this is not the place!


    ****! Girl you so materialistic, you done went ballistic
    spending like yo last name is Combs, and we don't have
    several homes! And we about to lose the one we got.
    Ouch, now they taking your Renta Center Couch!

    Soul scraping, are you feeling any pain!
    **** then I have to do it again.
    Did you go to church this Sunday?
    Did you even stop to pray?
    Well if you deny him now , what do you think
    about Judgement day?
    Ouch , now I know you feeling the pain from
    your lazy tailbone to your whacked out brain.
    Did you look for work today?
    Did you help a friend?
    Did you finish all your work , before the shift
    did end?
    How many baby mama/daddy drama's have you
    participated in , **** you made a baby at least
    you could be friends.
    Didn't send the child support check cause you haven't
    seen your kid?
    Didn't see him last month, when was the last time you did?


    Ouch! Can't stand that man cause he up and left you with another mouth to feed. He told you he didn't want to be
    a father right then. But, you insisted you do it again.
    And this time you got the condom and a safety pin.
    ****, I know that hurt cause we scraping through
    the flesh....
    Soul Scraping!
    Done any lately?

    BJS (c)2001
     
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    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mz B......

    All I can say is SUPERB! :toast:


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done

    flowin' ya butt off i see:D
     
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    tHANKS!

    EPIPHANY MY BRIGHT CHILD,I can always depend on you to read!
    And give encouraging comment thank you!
    And blessings on Ya House:D

    RICH, just doing what Destee has inspired me to do, write for the sheer joy of creating! No money involved no deadlines and no
    stress! Thank you kind sir! I will be awaiting further comment!;)
     
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