Black Poetry : soul-physically-deep

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  1. SmoovVerbiage

    SmoovVerbiage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ©cj2006
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    ahhhh

    did i do all that?

    lol

    ... its still a

    phenomenon to me,

    how you complement

    me from hundreds of

    miles away.

    I have such great power don't I

    lolololololololololol

    sprung? huh

    mmmmmmmm something to ponder
    yea i said ponder that's still english right?
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    did you do that?

    Only you and I will know the answer to that.:wink:

    I can always count on you to take me in and feel me

    yes "ponder" is still in the english language

    thanks for showin' YLSS some love T. B So'ja



    Coco
     
  4. MrAdams

    MrAdams Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: hi

    good-afternoon SmoovVerbiage,


    just on the board for a few minutes...


    ==
    ==
    ... its still a
    phenomenon to me,
    how you complement
    me from hundreds of
    miles away.

    you would probably say,
    "she’s sprung!" and
    I favorably agree

    ... cause I’m in love
    with our friendship and
    I plan to bask in it, as we sail
    on the soul-good waves to forever

    ==
    ==


    indeed friedships should never be taken for granted, as i for one also feel the same way when it comes to some of my lady friends... we seem to be able to connect on many levels, yet never cross that line... ( aka... become romantic involved ) glad to know this brother literally makes u blush, and all... do continue to nuture what u two have, and i say why not read this poem to him... -Smile-


    have a nice day...

    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
  5. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I LIKE THAT THIS WAS JUST BEAUTIFUL AND I CAN DEFINATLY RELATE
    THIS FRIENDSHIP IS SPECIAL IN EVERYWAY AND THESE FEELINGS RUN DEEP
    KEEP THIS STRONG SMOOV

    THIS WAS VERY WELL WRITTEN

    SWEETTEE29, LOVE
     
  6. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smoov:
    Now I like this....


    "soul-physically-deep"

    The title is all that....as well as the piece itself.
    I'm feeln' you on this one sista Smoov.

    Much Luv
     
  7. SmoovVerbiage

    SmoovVerbiage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you...

    4EVERLUV, sweettee29 & MrAfrica
    For your time and kind comments
    feelin' anything soul-deep can be
    intense. And MrAfrica I have read
    this to him.


    SmoovV
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow.....this was beyond to a
    soul-physically-deep within my soul
     
  9. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh wow!!!
    my,my,my!!
    I likes..A lot.
     
  10. SmoovVerbiage

    SmoovVerbiage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich and Sweet...

    thanks for the visit to my space. Always appreciated


    SmoovV
     
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