Black Poetry : Soul Memoir's

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Apr 23, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the tension grew,
    i remember the tears that would peep
    out the corners of my eyes
    and drown in the mirror i was facin
    to see how beautiful/ugly
    i was and tyme would S...P...A...C...E
    o...
    u...
    t...

    why u runnin on the Sun when it burns
    the soles of yo feet Man?

    Iz yo soul tired of cryin
    shrivelin up like a prune
    on a hot summah day cuz
    of lyfes insecurities?

    Iz what des nikkas say startin
    to emerge from yo soul
    makin yo heart cold?

    shouldn't be...cuz i know that the Big Dipper
    dipped its moonshine to on your head makin
    ya Chakras cleanse deepening enlightenments glare,
    till u went blind....

    i could have sworn i saw u dancein
    yesteryear celebrating the Moon's
    birthday/rebirth into the cosmic
    galaxies....

    or maybe that was u chillin
    wit a beer-belly strokin a 40 oz.
    watchin "Chingy" on BET uncut
    while droolin ova cars that
    will nevah be in ur possesion...


    it was 160 degress to go
    again till the dawn would
    greet your face and u would finally know....wisdom


    (i know that the stuff i have been writing has been kinda off the wall lately pleaz do not be alarmed.....jus tryin a new style:)

    :heart:
    -story

    copywrite 2004, all rights reserved
     
  2. MrAdams

    MrAdams Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: hi

    good-evening the_story ,


    brother decided to hit the board tonight...


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    this is indeed more of a freestyle piece my little poetic sister... still i'm feeling it as it always nice to try out different writing styles, etc... one can see that you have grown not only as a person but a poet, since joining DESTEE'S poetic family... toast


    keep the ink flowing... have a nice night...


    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahh brother africa, nice to see the one behind ctadams.com, i'm a member their as well, glad u liked my flows...
    :heart:
    -story
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well dang!

    Ya did it again, story. Chakras and all. Once again I ask, are you sure you're 14? :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i love this flow u really have a sweet gift
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love this line...

    Girl...try out those new styles...you know everything
    you touch turns to GOLD...


    flow on sister...I'm feeling ya...
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis....i'm positive i'm 14, lol, no lie here, all honesty

    rich...thanks ya man...lol

    angel...lol....i think i have the midas touch...lol j/k glad u feelin my flow...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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