Black Poetry : Soul Mates

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  1. POETIC RAPTURE

    POETIC RAPTURE Active Member MEMBER

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    His soul-destroying kiss
    stops the world from spinning
    Wait, I'm getting ahead of myself
    let me start from the beginning
    Online by chance
    But we met by fate
    Even from the start
    I knew I'd found my soul-mate
    His soul made my heart vibrate
    with a vibe so exquisite
    I would've done anything
    not to miss it
    Who would've guessed
    while we were having fun
    that we would stop being two
    and become one
    He's my shoulder,
    my brother,
    my rock
    like no other
    I love that MAN!
    He is my King!
    He makes me smile from my heart
    and makes my soul sing
    the distance between us
    could never seperate our souls
    as long as we stay true
    and play our roles
    Everyday our love grows
    is cause for celebration
    I'm ready to commit
    to a lifetime collaboration
    As time passes by
    we'll grow old together
    holding each other
    on the edge of forever.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was love & togetherness
    so beautiful and very warm my heart was racing
    my vision was whoaaaaaaa! need me a mate like dis
    tyte scribe
     
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    oh i like...
    :heart:
     
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    Thanks. I just wanna share my love with all of you. And I hope you all can know the joy I know.
     
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    yes indeed i know this so well and da feelings
     
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    i'm really lovin' this...
     
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    POETIC RAPTURE Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks LovelyG! Glad to know you like it.
    I finally found the man that lights my heart,
    and all others seem dim by comparison.
     
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    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I over-stand...
    Loved this
    E
     
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    this was an incredible flow...
    love your style...

    especially the beginning...
    His soul-destroying kiss
    stops the world from spinning
    Wait, I'm getting ahead of myself
    let me start from the beginning
     
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