Black Poetry : Soul Lost

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Akilah, Nov 7, 2005.

  1. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SOUL LOST

    Lying next to him…
    While thinking ‘bout you
    What am I to do ?

    He kisses me…
    I taste you
    He touches me …
    I feel your warmth

    A wicked tempation…
    Only 21, a VERY young lover
    With me old enough to be your mother

    Dreams of me and you keep swirling…whirling
    My mind floods with the most unpure thoughts

    Is it too late to turn back ?
    Or is my soul already lost ?

    Your eyes do something to me
    Like black magic… or voodoo

    I crave to feel you inside me
    Thrusting...steadily
    Turning back time & erasing memories

    Oh that the universe would stand still
    For just ONE sweet day….and look...the other way ​



    ~ Akilah Nov 2005 ~
     
  2. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, that was hot Akilah. Beautiful indeed.;)
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

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    i liked this...
     
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    You took us into that moment, of knowing it's wrong, but feeling so right. So good to read something from you poet.
     
  5. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kente, LovelyGoldenOne,watzinaname..

    Thank you all...much appreciation to you !

    Akilah ~
     
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    nice flow, flow on poet,
     
  7. Khasm13

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    whoa...this was extremely tight akilah...
    u should flow over here more often...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    i love this,
     
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    WHEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

    FIIIIIIIIRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.....................somebody throw me some water please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    talk too us sis.........................WOW, lovin it!!!!!!!!!!!!1
     
  10. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nevar, Khasm, Ibrahim, & Info-Moetry...

    Being acknowledged by poets such as yourselves makes my WEEK !

    Hotepu ~
     
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