Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Jan 28, 2004.
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2 pairs of hands, molding thoughts that capture the best in us, the power and beauty of us....wow....amazing collab.
Hi AngelicSage and PositiveMindset,
This was ooh soo nice.
Reading about capabilities of man's hand, so perfectly put together physically, capable of building a house, warming a man's soul, lift somebody's spirit,.... hold a gun.
So many contradictions, important is how you choose to use your
'hand/soul-hand'. And you guys choose to focus on one of the most beautiful thing a 'hand/soul-hand' can do. Show your affection and love to your beloved one, with a simple gesture!!!!
You surely touched me with your soulhands !!!
this was so beautiful two handz poeticly wow!!!
Ahhhh, but the beauty…
When clasped in prayer
Or resting upon a pregnant womb
Perhaps, elegantly captured in a Michelangelo
The pride shown atop a child’s head
Oh, those hands…they do intrigue
Producing masterpieces of art…
In music, paintings and poetry"
Open your hand...
Let me study your lifeline.
Each curve & break tells the story of your lifetime.
I can see that you're a nurturer capable
of dissolving bad thoughts with a soft touch."
those verses did it for me...
thanks for the lovely presentation poets
2 people with sexy vibes intertwined, very nice..whose idea was it??..Nicely put you 2
What a beautiful masterpiece painted from an image so simple...
I am in awe...
My soul sista & Brotha Warrior...*applause*
Words can not describe the immense and profound beauty of this piece/peace
Two thumbs Up!
so soothing and comforting is the flow that you two rolled out to us...i wish i was at home reading this because i would sip on a cup of tea and hum this sweet melody....thanks the both of you, i needed this flow this morning, such a nice way to start of the day...sage and positive, yall get a soul pound for this one
HELLO, THE HELL "oh"! I will never disregard to power of my hands again. Perfect Call and response. Like Coltrane and Lady Holiday!
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