Black Poetry : Soul Godess (unfinished)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ScorpioRising, May 12, 2004.

  1. ScorpioRising

    ScorpioRising Member MEMBER

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    You found me
    Somewhere on the 3rd moon of Obsession
    Sipping passion coconut milk
    In straw hat and white linen sundress

    Chillin...
    Sun hot on my body like untouched desire

    Warm winds blow strong
    Then gentle over Ascension tree tops

    Rustlin...
    Rustlin...
    Throwing shade on my toes

    "Hi" you said
    Innocent enough

    "Hey" I replied
    Just as innocent

    I remembered your voice
    Heavy as a thousand men
    Your words just as subtle

    "I've travelled so far to find you
    You must return with me"

    I laugh

    "You're mine
    You are made to be mine
    Let's go..."

    I tip my sunglasses down
    Peepin this...this MAN
    But you were so honey brown
    Strong

    Eyes intense
    Deep as Stevie Wonder lyrics

    Your lips a choir singing divine harmonies to my thighs

    You're serious, aren't you? ...Quickly regaining my front

    You took my hand
    Power!

    I...
    I...felt like...
    ...I mean you...
    Dayum!

    Something moved me to follow you
    Why?

    *No*
    *No...I can't go*
    *And who do you think you are...*

    Words thought spoken were heard..."I belong to you"
    *What the hell!*

    Countless stars shimmered into existence
    As if our togetherness conjured worlds in Heaven
    And histories were being written

    HIS story?
    Was I just a story...
    a tale...
    a fable in your Great Book of Conquests
    Growing cold...
    Used with each hand written letter drying on parchment

    Oh but not THIS one!
    I shine eternally anew
    Reborn in hearts of galaxies...

    You tighten your grip on me and I weaken *whoa*
    My body so responsive to you
    As a bass guitar plays acid, blues, gospel, funk
    Heart beating in soul claps
    Complex rhythms intertwining my thoughts
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very very nice piece!!!!!!!!!!
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems like your soul was taken over, captured in the strength of this man, what a way with words.
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I only have one thing to say...

    You are Poet (sorry that was three words... :wink: )

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  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribe here u had it max out
     
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