Black Poetry : Soul Fed...Soul Read... Poetry Write?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NittyGrit, Oct 25, 2004.

  1. NittyGrit

    NittyGrit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my weeping pen
    cries tears of ink
    birthed by the emotional
    thoughts I think

    a lonely pad
    soaks up the pain
    and on each naked line
    words leave black and blues stains

    the strength in each stanza
    is deeper than creative expression
    for me...poetry is an intimate confession
    the first day of pentacost
    and 3rd day of resurrection

    thoughts no longer dormant
    in a sullen and caustic grave
    my spirit comes alive
    every time my soul impregnates the page

    ripe with life
    dues, dont's, wrongs and rights
    tenured experience and heartfelt advice
    an eye opening invitation
    take a glimpse at my plight

    let your eyes slowly glide
    in and out of each line
    let me write on your soul
    as you read about mine

    NittyGritt (c) 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done poet from each line i feel the depth of ya soul
    and the river of ya mind flowing tyte write here ..........
     
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    NittyGrit
    NittyGrit
    NittyGrit
    dag
    this flow
    has open another door
    for me to ponder and wonder
    i like what you wrote
    feeling each pen stroke
    a release
    that is deep
    sweet poetry
    much love
    this is wow, and more

    Blue:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And you did just that, you wrote on my soul as I read about yours. Yep, we feel ya poet. Flow on, please.
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flow is PHENOMENAL!!!! I can't say enough about it to justify it. You have a great gift.
     
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    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooohhh I loved the phlow of this one.....

    'As my soul impregnates the page': classic personification :welldone:

    Each stanza was strong. :weights:

    This was tyte. Keep scribing and building up ya passion. :D
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was well done
    i enjoyed this flow
    it was written with deep passion
    and deep meaning
    tight flow
    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :drums: Beat that drum playa and your poet vibe is felt indeed. Nice drop! :hearthis:
     
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