Black Poetry : Soul Child Lullaby

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by naija-man, Sep 7, 2004.

  1. naija-man

    naija-man Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A bundle of joy since the day you came,
    Unique child with no other the same,
    look to the future and what it holds,
    you'll be a child with spirit and heart of gold,

    You're still young and tender and full of hope
    the times may get hard but you will still cope,
    grow strong and proud and be the best you can be,
    no one can stop you for itr's your destiny,


    There are no need for tears and no need for screams,
    rest your mind young soul child, and be peaceful in your dreams,
    this really isn't much, just a lullaby for you,
    small words of encouragement to help you keep true.

    you will one day burn brightly, your flames will ever survive,
    You'll be your mother's joy and be your father's pride.

    Stay peaceful sould child, you need not cry,
    all words of comfort are in this lullaby.


    ©Naija-Man 2004
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet as rain, let it flow!
     
  3. Poeticsoulsista

    Poeticsoulsista Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very soothing :boring: . Much love. Keep doing your thang.

    Poetic Sista
     
  4. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    a wonderful lullabye...
    keep singing ...soothing, calming, loving and reinforcing your bundle of joy
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the warmth felt inside this graceful lullabye
    just perfect and beautiful
     
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    This was sweet yet strong at the same time. A touching lullaby.
     
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    The love really shines from this piece. Big thumbs up n then some.
     
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    welcome back brotha long time no see
    Spread poetic love and give love to recieve love and may the poetic love Grow :)
    welcome back home :wave:
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very peaceful..thanks for sharing..welcome back too!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Aww.. where's my little boo-boo? I need to hugga him! Aww... There's something in my eye... *sniffle*
     
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