Black Poetry : Soul Brother

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Nov 30, 2005.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im more than a man
    Im your backbone
    Your strength
    Dont duck your head
    Wipe away your tears
    Let me kiss your forhead
    Take a day off I'll do the chores
    Take your clothes off
    Relax close the sauna door
    Soul Brother
    The name just speaks to you
    Young Black and Ambitious
    Strong Black yes im gifted
    I never want too see you sad
    Thats the only thing in this world
    That makes me mad
    I'll bust my a--
    Just as long as your glad
    You need to take a break from work
    Take a month
    The bills I got that
    Long days from work
    Bubbles already warmed up
    Candles already lit
    Roses already picked
    Scattared across the tile and the floors
    Your favorite fragrance
    Can you smell the aroma
    Make you close your eyes
    When you hit the door
    The vibe you get
    Its not quite like you expect
    Not trying to make love
    Just trying to sooth your body
    Yet when we ready we will take that ride
    Come on baby the foods getting cold
    I can feed you too
    Open wide
    Blow it once
    Im in Love with you
    Your Soul Brother

    Sincerly,

    Tantrum "Last Of My Kind"
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awesome piece poet, it was felt...from the heart, tight flow
     
  3. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Queen
    I appreciate the Love You bring
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    stand strong brother
    let them know who you b
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A mighty good man a woman can appreciate. Enjoyed your flow.
     
  6. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You
    Da Street So'ja & watzinaname
    Men need to refocus what woman want
    Not what we think they need
     
  7. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a nice touch brotha lettin it be known that brothas still have heart
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up Tantrum
    just dat simple
    not only a soul brutha but her soul mate
    speak on now tell it all........................
     
  9. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow tantrum keep doing your thang bro.
     
  10. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You
    For the love
    Soulful-Nevar & Brother $$RICH$$
    Black Unity is the key to success
     
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