Black Poetry : sorting it out

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rasheed, Jan 21, 2004.

  1. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you woke up and there you were
    sorting it out
    and there you were
    and everything that was was here
    and it's very clear
    it's discovery
    and sometimes recovery
    are we insane
    everyone keeps trying to explain
    what it's all about
    what's being left out
    we witness the effects and reason
    we seek the cause
    enters in a new season
    it makes us pause
    reorder our thinking
    throw out some of our conclusions
    to stop our sinking
    heal our confusions
    we keep on going
    learning as we move
    we keep on growing
    trying to improve
    then we reach another level
    and see things diff-rently than before
    the white man aint neccesarily the devil
    got to look into the core
    of this IS that we've been cast into
    and identify the successful road
    before the clock runs out
    and we can no longer make any decisions
    we just have to take what's dished out
    take the death dealing collision
    TICK TOCK
    goes the clock
    WAKE UP
    you can't afford to just be in shock
    you've got see what it's all about
    got to sort it out
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gosh your flow give so much in depth explanatoin to the simple sorts in life...
    yes i truly like this flow
    Peace
    Blue:heart:
     
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    OH BROTHA RASHEED!!!!!!!!!!!!
    :grouphug:

    I walk this road and it brings a whole LOT of "discovery" :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed this was outstanding love it our brother
    is deep and poeticly tyte
    flow on Rasheed
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, this is something that we do need to sort out....in time it will happen. Thought provoking drop...keep writing.
     
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    our poet of the week .....in flow
     
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    very nice drop
    flow on :angel1:
     
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