Quiet Poetry Lounge : sorting it out...write

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Apr 26, 2002.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes I have to stop
    writing altogether
    and just think

    think about this good mess
    this sweet ****
    this crazed sanity
    this happy madness

    & let it marinate
    let it sink in
    let it infiltrate
    every cell
    permeate every
    nerve
    penetrate every
    orofice
    let it bounce off
    the inner chambers
    of the heart
    feel it glaze over every
    crevice of the cranial
    lobes
    hear it
    slip through that
    middle ear
    and beat up against
    the drum

    I have to cogitate
    & ruminate
    just let it soak in
    and
    germinate

    and then I
    pick up the
    pen
    and try it
    one mo
    gen...


    alyce (c) 2002
     
  2. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your system results in magic Ms A. Don't change a thang.

    BE
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just cuz you said so.... :heart:

    alyce
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOOOO YES!!! I KNOW WHAT U MEAN !!! TYGHT VIBE A.....
     
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    Beautiful alyce. You have such an amazing, gentle flow!
     
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    GIRLLLLLL U JUST DO THAT THERE..... JUST WHAT U SAID ....
    LOVELY, BRAVO
     
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