Quiet Poetry Lounge : Sorry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by miomina1, Apr 22, 2004.

  1. miomina1

    miomina1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sorry for my arrogance
    Sorry for my ways
    Sorry for my negligence
    On all those lonely days

    Never payed attention, much
    Sorry all the time
    I stole you with my tainted love
    Sorry for the crime

    Anger, bitter, hurt and trapped
    Sorry, now and then
    Leaving me, is the only choice
    A sorry way to end

    Sorry
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome to destee.com quiet flowz
    welcome to the family of lovin bond & peace
    welcome from above as i bless u some love
    welcome tyte write poet !
     
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    Awe!
    Sad but I still like!
    Flow on!
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm sorry for 2004.....lol that was a nice nice well posted drop flow on poet
     
  5. miomina1

    miomina1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is not my Sorry for 2004!

    Hey , I wrote this poem over two years ago, during a failing relationship :thanks:
     
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    At least 2 sides to every story, this was a sorrowful side, but it sounded as though you were coming to terms somehow. Once again, I feel your words strongly.
     
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    touch by your opening
    in this short, yet deep poem
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    I like the decisiveness in it. There were no begging for mercy in your poem, I liked that a lot.
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    miomina,
    like your flow, rhythm and message; i have read your poem, "Waiting" and i detect a unique "signature" style.....

    "sorry is a sorry word" they say and i have witnessed this in my lifetime but it also sets a foundation and springboard to continue on.....

    Peace and Blessings
     
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