Black Poetry : ...Sorry...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Jun 20, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as i gaze
    into your eyes
    i look past
    your souls disguise
    i can tell
    you want my love
    and to me
    that's a surprise
    aren't you the one
    that ran away?
    aren't you the one
    that bruised me internally?
    aren't you the one
    that stole my heart?
    and now you want me to love
    like i did from the start?
    darlin'
    you've got it all wrong
    you must think
    time revolves around your love
    well...
    i've got some news for you
    you,
    me,
    what we had,
    and all the dreams of our future
    are through

    sorry........
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tell him man.......you're married to your best friend :) Nice flow Well written
     
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    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this flow...oneday I will be saying those exact words...
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot girl:)
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oops!i didn't see u rico.........thanks:)...i hope everything works out for u...
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooooooooohhhhhhhh girl you are so wrong lol nah I'm kiddin he was wrong for ever leaving YOU and you was so right for writing this flow much luv
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, yeah he was wrong...but now i'm glad he left me so that i could move on...thanks girl:)
     
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    looks like you need to be escorted into true love...

    l could show you the way.
     
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    This was tyte, LovelyGoldenOne!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    speak on it sistah
    let it be known !
    tyte scribeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
     
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