Black Poetry : Sorry its been a min... "Afternoon"

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  1. dreadpoet

    dreadpoet Member MEMBER

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    Afternoon....
    Long drive meeting you..
    @ home..
    doors opens with a smile..
    from both of us..
    thoughts of.."at the least.. we can kick it for a while".

    I feel a tear build,
    in awe of your presence..
    blackness uncomplicated..
    and sexy..
    refiness underated..
    you exude divine presence.

    I open the door for U,
    with the respect i would give my mother.
    You smile and unlock mine.
    no words..
    mutual.
    Driving,
    music gets in the way of your sweet silence.
    I could listen all the way there.
    I have the sun, a smile, divine silence ..
    and U.
    "this is what heaven must be like..." *smile*
    Destination near,
    we had talked,
    or been silent..
    for about an hour now... not long enough.
    But i already know U,
    I have all my life.
    Be easy luv, i mean you no harm at all.
    As i say were are here you ask where..
    I reply with a smile..
    so do U.. mutual.
    As the car stops , a pause erupts..
    you hop out of my truck as to not allow me to dominate you..
    message: opened doors are fine..
    But, i await an open soul, and heart to pair.

    I grab the basket swiftly..
    as to still worship your frame..
    perfect in its imperfections, still..
    I pause still..
    still..
    in awe.. again!
    You turn to meet my eyes..
    sit at a bench nearby..
    and say...
    " If you are as sweet as you seem, you just might get a chance to feel heaven too.."

    Have you ever seen a man smile with his mouth open?
    *smile*

    Next statement:" now come and talk to me.. continue to make me feel special"
    I am speechless,
    at the thought of even entering her..
    ****..
    "Heaven must be like this...."
    I work up a stern stare and say.." Touch my chest.. and ease my excited heart..."
    before i can reach for U..
    you lay your head upon my chest and I feel a tear build ..
    again..
    I forget how we got to this spot..
    both in the meta and the physical..
    but,
    I am pleased with my circumstance and dream of..
    you...
    in rollers..
    two children attached to your legs..
    robe hiding your queenly stature..
    bringing me wheat toast, cheese eggs and grits..
    with an afterglow..
    a smile..
    and a card reading happy 10th anniversary"..
    ****..
    "Heaven must be like this..."
    on this afternoon.
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet Flo!

    I likes!:toast:
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gotta praise this one, because between the lines of artistry, I see a man reflecting in the glory of his queen, their seeds, and their togetherness. 360 degrees of inseparation -life eternal. Bless you and the thought. Holla.
     
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