Black Poetry : Sorry I must go....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sorry I must go
    For you have no
    Room in your life…

    For the one that tries to hard
    to grab your attention…
    you feed her right back…
    she not have to try as hard…
    for I have left out the door…

    sorry but I must go…
    call me silly
    I may even be
    Taken over
    By that green eyed devil…
    But how ever it maybe

    Sorry I must go….
    You tell me don’t worry
    No one can touch me…
    But time and time again…
    You show me different…

    So I bid by good byes
    For I am sorry…
    I must go….
    one last kiss right
    Here on the cheek...
    I have turn my back...
    Sorry i must go
    a blkangel thang......:kiss:
     
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    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    This was beautiful, I could feel every emotion!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep emotions flowin
    and doubts of one's love
    this piece speaks openly and fill
    wit deep feelings

    sometime we all have to make a move of what the heart feel
    this was deeply felt .
    wow!
     
  4. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl...i feel ya. that green eyed monster can be right sometimes. I loved this.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice. Blkangel

    I'll clear my calendar. I'll clean up my life. Please don't go baby.
    :cry: :cry:
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you my RICHNESS for taken the time to read...

    true love.....girl it aint that hard for thet green eyes thang to come either....lol thank you for posting and reading

    suddenpassion...thank you
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HODEE....thank you for readin....dont cry awwwwwww
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooo...i feel this soooo right now...This is sumthing im going thru but i never had the poetic power to put it into word....but you do it so effortlessly :) :love:
     
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    Sometimes it's like that! U gotta move on.
    Nice!!
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SwtT...well if it is bringin
    you down dont stay love yourself
    be yourself
    have strength
    in time every thing have a end...
    seasons change...thx for the read....

    POETIC BABI...yes you do...but no support you some times stay when you should walk out that door....
     
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