Black Poetry : Sorry I dont come home

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  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I dont stop by
    And I dont say I love you
    I dont see you anymore
    and its because I'm scared
    the doctor told me
    at 19 and
    what i used to think full of life and health
    Cancer may be about to clock me out
    I'm too young for such a sickness
    I want to live and love and
    I dont know but
    I dont come around because
    I dont want to die now
    Or hurt right now
    I just want to live
    I'm sorry
    I was thinking yesterday
    I might want to join the army
    Go active and see the world
    and this disease may take it all away from me
    and all I can say is sorry
    Sorry I dont come home because the truth of the matter
    is one of these days if I have this thing and I can't beat this thing
    I just wont come home

    All truth I might have cancer y'all
     
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    With all truth

    I plead the blood
    over every cancer in your body

    And I pray heavenly Father
    Will touch you from the

    Crown of your head
    To the souls of your feet

    I pray that are areas
    Specific
    With cancer will line up

    With the will of God.

    And I decree it this day forth

    That no weapon formed against you shall prosper

    You are more than a conquerer

    Through Christ Jesus Our Lord!

    Be blessed today in the presence of the Lord!

    Sincerely,

    Desert Storm
     
  3. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In every way that it matters I can smile about this even if it means I don't have the days I thought I had yesterday.
     
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    Our Dear Beloved Sister Soulful ... :grouphug: ... Bless Your Sweet Darling Heart ... :grouphug:

    Yesss you are a Baby ... a BEAUTIFUL BABY at that, might i add!!! :love:

    I'm sorry to read the above, but don't you be claiming it as your own Sister! :spank:

    Let the doctors do what they do, but you keep believing that life is yours!

    It is yours you know ... for you are here right now with us, and that's all we're promised, right now.

    Tomorrow may find me, and a whole bunch of other folk gone on, and you'll still be here!

    Keep living your BEAUTIFUL wonderful life ... don't stop ... don't ever stop!

    Keep Looking Up Pretty Black Girl ... :kiss: ... (that's what i'd say to my baby) ... i even bought the domain name ... prettyblackgirl.com ... with Pretty Black Babies just like you in mind! :wink: ... But Yes Yes Yes ... Keep Looking Up, Remain Forever Encouraged ... especially when it's hard to do!

    Stay Strong! :weights:

    Don't be staying away either! Talk'n 'bout you sorry, you better get on home to us moe regular! :spank:

    Love You Sister! :love:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can feel the strength in you, amidst the fear and the uncertainty. It's that strength that brought you back to this poetry forum, the strength that allowed you to write this poem, and the strength that empowered you to click submit.
    I've read much of your poetry, and your pen showcases your talent, and shows what a bright and shining star you are. I pray that all goes well with your health. Please keep communicating with us. Welcome back home. :)
     
  6. Yemoja'sGoddess

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    Dear Sweet Sistah and Child of Light,

    I worry not that you will be just fine. For the Divine loved you so much to breathe life into you from the start, I doubt not that s/he will take it away from you before it's time. Ask yourself a question Honeybaby, which is stronger... fear or death? Do not allow fear to kill you far before you actually take your last breath. For life is love and love is life, continue to dance the world up and smile with that beautiful smile you have. You are just fine either way! I have been through a lot of health challenges myself at a very young age. At 23, I have had 3 surgeries, been hospitalized so many times I've lost count, been in a severe car accident where I had to re~learn things that most take for granted, AND THE LIST GOES ON AND ON! I also have a 8 year old son that I care for. I allowed NONE of those thing to stop me, and this WILL NOT STOP YOU! SMILE, FOR THE DIVINE GOD/GODDESS IS WITHIN YOU!

    MY PRAYERS ARE WITH YOU!

    HOTEP/PEACE

    Yemoja'sGoddess
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    make sure FIRST POET

    and you're young enough to defeat it

    SO STAY STRONG AND HANDLE YOURS

    keep your head UP

    don't bow under ANY circumstances


    life and death are one in the same

    so live as long as the spirit allows

    and live with the spirit

    peace and GOOD LUCK
     
  8. BrandNewMe

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    We all have felt your poem, and you are not alone.
    Sometimes all we can do is live our days with love and joy, and let tomorrow be another day Be happy sister don't be sad, you have a very lovely smile, and caring heart. Be Happy and Keep Loving and Sharing.as much as your heart will let you. Because gray clouds are only a shade, Your rainbow is there, and once again you are not alone. Keep writing and sharing
    I'm Sending lots of love and prayer your way

    Peace and More
    BrandNewMe
     
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    peace and blessings to you as i see you spoke from the heart
     
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