Black Poetry : Sorry fella’s no offense just a little realism so don’t get tense! I luv ya’ll

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  1. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mickey D’s



    Don’t you just hate those silly lines men say?
    telling you this and that to try to have their way.
    Like “Wow” girl I must be dreaming cause your
    beauty got me screaming, or “Hey baby” fries
    come with that shake? “Girl I’m so hypnotized
    by your beauty I could of swore we were having
    an earthquake.

    Some are so crazy you just got to laugh, the
    problem is they look at you like your something
    good to eat licking there lips grabbing their crouch
    like you a rare piece of meat.

    Admiring beauty is no doubt a wonderful thing, but
    brothers approach it with some respect get smooth
    with it “do yo thang” you’d have better luck and
    and much more to gain.

    Copyright by Yvonne Coleman-Burney (Queen) 2002
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes our mouths speak before our minds can put it all together.

    Some women are just mindblowing.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL!

    Scribe about it my sista! That was too real, I am sure a book could be written about "cheesy" onliners that men say to women. I enjoyed this little ditty!
    Blessings on ya House!:D
     
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