Black Poetry : Sorry 2004....

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  1. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When an apology just isn’t enough
    Well wat more am I to do?
    Ive explained myself a million times over..
    Until I just don’t see the use in tryin anymore.
    One hug, a greeting between friends, has torn us apart.
    Ive lost u to a stony heart, but really, is that the truth?
    There has to be more to this never ending story.
    Why wont u receive me back with
    Open arms, as u have done once before, for my heart
    Feels a great need for you.
    But I will not degrade myself and repetitively say im sorry.
    So I guess this is “good bye” like u said.
    So why am I still trying to get u to see the light
    In all of this madness?
    Yet u refuse to let me back in. the doors of
    ya heart are bolted shut.
    So I turn my back, and head down the road, on the long
    Journey that I hope will someday lead me to
    The the “true love” of my life…
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yes...
    so sad...
    and yes
    there is so much more

    what is one to do
    the road to love
    is indeed a journey
    so true...
    looking forward to reading
    more of your flows

    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling ya flow on and again welcome to destee's
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, that feeling you get when sorry isn't quite enough, but you feel it certainly should be. I felt the ache in this. Glad you've joined us here MzMelanie.
     
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    You describe a very JEALOUS fellow in this poem. No one needs someone that immature, crazy and insecure.

    :hearthis: Admission.... I once was immature, crazy and insecure.

    When I was young I walked away from someone that cared for me. :hearts2: I think I was afraid of her because she was so outgoing and forward. She knew what she wanted. There were those who wanted me and her to break up. I listened to rumors, and even made up some parts of the issue. She was talking with an old boyfriend, it may have been true. I look back, I don't really know. She hadn't done anything I could prove. I didn't accept her apology. I was foolish.

    Welcome to Destee MzMelanie2u2 I enjoyed reading this.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling ya flow nice vibe here

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Well Done

    :welldone: My sister!

    When sorry is no longer good enough it's time to let it go.
    I really enjoyed reading the emotion in this piece and I hope this gives u peace of mind in it's release!
    :coffee:
     
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    c gurl i told u u had mad flow, keep em coming mad luv to u.
     
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