Black Poetry : Sorrow Revealed

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  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I close my eyes tight
    Squeezing the last tear drop from my eyes
    My sorrow has been revealed
    To uncover
    A dark
    Endless
    Abyss
    It hurts
    To love
    Feelings
    Cause pain
    What once was
    Can never be again
    Shattered trust
    Glittering in the sun like shards of glass
    7 years of heartbreak
    sorrow revealed
    the memory of the beginning
    the hope for the future
    the presence of contentment
    the relief of finally finding that which it was forever seeking
    the sorrow of the realization that it was never what you thought it was
    or even what you wanted
    my heart is heavy
    my soul is cold
    for my sorrow
    has been revealed

    Natasha
     
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    SORROWFUL PAIN FELT

    MANY NIGHT OF YESTERDAY INTO TODAYS
    LIFE AND NO LOVE FOUND UNDER THE TARP
    SORROW TEARS
    CAST OF PAIN
    REVEALS BROKEN HEART

    U SAID A LIFE STORY HERE..
     
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    To live is to feel sorrow
    To feel sorrow is to know that joy waits in the morning.
    Hold on knowing that the morning will come
    and the light of joy will chase the shadows of sorrow away.
     
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    nat, i can relate, dear poetess. lovin' the way this melancholy flows.
     
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    one old classic returns reading it again took me back !
    long lost where can one be today !
     
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    hey welcome back sister.. and oh boy did you return!
    I felt you on this...
    Its nice to identify with another poet so deeply.. hope to read more!
     
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