Quiet Poetry Lounge : Soothing my soul!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by msluciousb, Oct 8, 2003.

  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Soothing my soul, cause once I lost control.
    Didn't know or like myself, your infidelity
    turned me into someone else.
    Drug me down into your pit of hell,
    where your drinking and drugging
    buddies did dwell.
    Tried to save you , but for what?
    You are happy in your rut!
    Soothing to my soul, cause now I am in
    control.
    Surrendered all to Jah...
    And now I love you from afar.

    Music, poetry and dance, no time
    right now for romance.
    Bubble baths to soothe my body,
    scented candles to light my inner sanctum. I choose mind liberating
    music, usually jazz or some "Luther"
    "Yolanda" when I need her and
    my eclectic mix when I feel frisky.
    Now I dance naked in my apartment.
    No one to tell me where the imperfections are... Like India Arie,
    I am happy with me!

    Let's take a long walk, as I listen to jazz and watch nature, the leaves are
    turning now, and my thoughts turn back to you. Your birthday is coming soon, and again your annual phone call asking for "Birthday nookie" though seven years we been divorced...do I say yes...the answer "Of course"
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
    I go on trips planned just for me, Florida Keys and Miami and Bahama's if I'm free. Loving the life I am living, cause
    it's
    soothing
    to
    my
    SOUL!
    BJS(c)2003
    :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    free free free!!!!
    no was the key
    movin forward
    all u can be
    enjoy the trip
    stay forever sweet
    i feel thee
     
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    this is a nice flow girl
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for reading and responding!

    I thank you all for reading, you don't have to stop and show me love and you do..."All the time", not just sometime, but all the time! And I love you all the more for it! It adds so much to my inspiration.

    Blessings On Your House!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this alot:)
     
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    Oh this is just a lovely piece! Thanks for sharing!
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks fellow scribes!

    I appreciate your comments immensely!
    Keep on reading and I'm gonna keep on writing, I love you LovelyGoldenone, for all ways coming to show me love...and my new Poet welcome to the Playground!
    You are in good company here...
    Blessings On Your House!
     
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