Black Poetry : Soon you'll understand

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SwtT, May 11, 2003.

  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're not listening to me!!!
    I'd never tell you wrong
    I think that you should leave him..
    It's sumthin you shoulda been done
    Who told you that lie?
    That I want him for myself?
    Judgin how he treats you...
    I rather shoot my **** self
    Man **** what you heard!
    I don't want his broke ***
    There's nothing he can give me
    Except pain and broken car glass
    That ni**as a stalker
    How can you call that love forever?
    He calls your house 50 times an hour
    Send you threatening letters
    Damnit open your eyes!
    I'm not the enemy here!
    Ive been your friend for 8 long years
    Im not the one you fear
    You told me once he hit you
    And I almost got my boy's friends
    I was gonna make him feel pain
    Then you said he wouldn't do it again
    But you're crying again
    And now you're starting to blame me
    But like I told your ***..Listen
    Stop closing your mind to me!
    Let me help you G
    Let me get you some tissue for those eyes
    I don't want to get a call at night
    Saying that my best friend just died
    Wait! Why are you leaving?
    To pick that n**a up from work?
    What the hell are you doing?
    I just told you that won't work!
    Don't push me away!
    Damnit now your making me cry..
    Please don't do this to yourself..
    Why are you doing this? Why?
    Cuz you love him?
    B*tch he don't love you!
    Then why do you have a black eye now?
    Don't you know he don't give a **** ABOUT YOU????
    Don't walk out that door..
    Fine go back to that illiterate junior mack
    Don't talk to me man...
    Wait ! Please come back!.......

    :door slam:

    Omg, what did I just say?

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  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayum that was so real and deep felt like I was right there girl hope you get your friend out of that situation it would be a shame to lose her to a quote on quote "illiterate junior mack" nice flow sista keep flowin peace and blessins
     
  3. kaly

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    I don't mean to seem as if I'm not listening
    But without him It seems like something's missing
    I know you would never tell me wrong
    But for some reason I keep holding on
    I can't explain it
    Don't want to claim it
    I love him and I hate him I feel like I'm stuck
    Maybe your right I should pack my s**t get the f**k up
    But wait
    I can't really hate
    What about the things that I've done
    Moved out town for a month took his only son
    Shoot out the his tires of his new car with his own gun
    Go with another man to Vegas to lay out in the sun
    Just to name some
    Sometimes I feel like he's just getting back for the things that I did
    Other times I feel like I'm staying not for love but for the sake of our kid
    I know there is no excuse
    No reason for spouse abuse
    But what do you tell the divorce courts when you explain this tragedy
    I have a year of charges on simple and aggrivated battery
    I haven't left because I'm depending on his salary to carry me
    I don't have any education and I don't have a car
    I guess that's why I put up with this bulls**t war
    But your right
    I'm leaving tonight
    If I pack my things up now I can make it out before he gets home
    I guess it's time for me and Jr. to be out on our own


    :door slam:
    ( I'll call later)
     
  4. justbnme03

    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice very nice, keep it comin
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i'll be ..........woooooweeeee!
    all i can say
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks everyone for your comment and complimets

    Serenti-I don't know she's kinda stubborn Thanks fo rthe love

    Kaly- great return on her . Im feeling that

    Rich -I accomplished making u speechless thx for the love :smile:
     
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    love is blind
    its all in da mind
    how one can take so much ish
    is truely sublime
    mouth shots
    beat downs of all shapes and kinds
    you can lead a horse to water
    and maybe in time
    she'll finally take a drink
    cause cats like that are stupid
    just like the missing link
    while at the same time being on the brink
    of killing the feeling
    smart ones should break away
    at the first physical dealing....

    i just cant stand
    a boy trying to act like a man...
    peace
    khasm
     
  8. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    swT, good *** poem n its unfortunate that women find themselves in these types of situations alot.

    kaly............ i like ur flow much love to the both of y'all :)
     
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    I love the way you flow
     
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    tyte scribe swtT. Felt the love for your friend.
     
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