Black Poetry : soon come

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by skrybe7, Sep 16, 2003.

  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whatever causes you
    to acquire happiness
    your hearts desire
    that is what I wish for you
    if it is what makes you free
    from any forms of captivity
    than that is the wish
    I wish for you
    so long as the road
    leads you where
    you are trying to be
    than fine by me
    sometimes the flame of pain
    cauterizes the wounds
    and stops the spill
    of emotions
    what ever is needed
    or desired
    is what I wish for you
    that if there are tears
    smiles soon come
     
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    Cindy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "sometimes the flame of pain
    cauterizes the wounds"

    Yes, this is so true... also, once realized that the pain can be put aside one can heal... haha like just taking your hand out of the fire. :)

    Oh, your wish
    Materialized into
    A beautiful dream
    And within
    Was all the things
    I have come to love
    The sounds of birds
    Waking to the morning
    A lite breeze that cools
    On a hot summer day
    The wonder of a butterfly
    That comes to rest
    On my shoulder
    The sounds of water
    Tumbling down a small hill
    A dream of life
    Within a stillborn heart
    You have caused to beat
    With love
    Once again....

    :heart:
    yeah...
    :wave:
    hey...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesome
    a much needed flow
    let ya ink continue
     
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    Mmmm...no smilies can say how powerful this one is :)
     
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    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow....I felt so many emotions coming out of this piece... a sense of "I've done all I can do make you happy, now its time to make you happy"...that for me, is a big act of love...i'm feeling this piece...

    lo'
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i felt you here..
    take dat pen of yours and
    keep flowin....
     
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    you are a romantic
    wow lovely
    Peace
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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