Black Poetry : SONNET of confession

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My moment of tyme
    dewell at the end
    off da edge of tomorrow
    from today worlds of
    greed and darkness
    from da depth of my
    own slumber inside da
    weaved chambers i sit
    at the corner stone of
    life embroidered purity
    my fate looms on the
    faith in a spinster of
    unjustice
    mastery skillz i take
    beside me da tapestry
    of youth in da fountain
    of multi colors
    my destiny sails unfurled
    off the magical glaze of
    foreverness
    Love become a prey
    deep inside my heart
    and my soul cry unto
    the master beyond mercy

    Deception
    didn't realize da world as it is
    for living what so ever be behind
    the mirror stand happiness yet
    sadness continue to claim and
    manifest into tomorrow and i
    know sorrow suit me not
    zipping my feeling at the close
    of the day into my silent sleep
    of eternalso it don't escape me
    again i now forever seal da morsal
    of my love and take it with me ....

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    2004 $R
     
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    this was deep....i am a little speechless
    on this one but can relate to this
    very good flow very good....
    makes one think

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Borrow tyme all we have
    there 's no countless days
    but shorten by seconds
    at the end i shell keep it all
    close where no harm is......
    Thankz Angel the mind roaming deep and out of reach !
     
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    I could feel the sadness in this, sad about the way things seem to be, sad about the intentions of others perhaps? Wrap yourself up, in all your hopes, dreams, and faith, and you will rediscover yourself there. Among what is real. Flow on.
     
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    happiness of sadness
    we carry along daily
    til the time a shine
    cover u and then u
    know ya confession
    was heard and u can
    hold it safely within
    Thankz watz for the visional way to rediscover what's loom deep.
     
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    the moment
    and the reality
    and the myth
    lay on the heart
    yet unknown by
    reasons when it
    end i so will carry
    it all in eternal....
     
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    Say Brother Rich. Is this a Petrarchan Sonnet or Shakespearean Sonnet?
     
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    Yes indeed i love this mindset you have
    as it flows deep much meaning comes from it
    this was a tight write.....
    Peace N Love
    Angel
     
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    Manasiac........it's more so kin into shakespear version

    Thankz a million sista Angel from the selfprofess files
     
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    sometime confession can be the ticket out
    as i river thoughts and heart mentally of a
    new sonnet.........................................
     
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