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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Life shape handz
    grasp corner of thy gift
    songs unto freedom
    love exchange in glances
    gentle drifting down
    deep hope rise unto da
    heavens in prayer forth
    the villages and valley's
    cry in da spi-na-ster
    of reasons where my
    honored ancestors lay
    in da depressional state
    black bones raddles
    my mother and her's
    my father's mother and I
    all join by the stanza of
    a quilted patteren material
    covered in comfort of a
    hope ya spirit pass through
    da village wings open like da
    swirls in calico white da glow
    pearls of blackness beauty
    weeping deep in hope as
    tomorrow burst free da depth
    unveiled to shape da visions
    in divine melodies diffusing afar
    age gone beyond conjuring
    twilight reveries the grasp
    between life and death in
    amber memories of enternity
    hope lashing un soundly their
    handz linger to protect me as
    I sleep ,collusions in delicate
    flight i rise in hope . :deal:

    AllRights Reserved
    2002 $R
     
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    Very beautiful and
    inspiring!

    Loving It!!!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow this was deep and truth to it
    posed well and with a grace
    i so love when you get this mood
    love ya Poet!!!
    your #1 fan :wink:
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz purplemoons as we know hope is alive

    thankz angel our hope is free and moving upward

    keeping faith that one day hope will be our reality
    in dis struggle
     
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    :bowdown: :bowdown:

    The last few lines, particularly, were exquisite. Wow.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes hope is all we have. I really liked the way you weaved your foreparents into this scribe. Flow on brotha.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank you gempis i tryed to do my best but u make me feel
    like i did a great job of dis creation of sonnet as i mold hope .

    thank you watz most humbled sistah u always know how to
    address a scribe feeling da beat of it yes i had to add my hope
    of forefather and ancestors who made this scribe come alive .
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dawg, you are too too much. Does your pen ever dry up LOL Keep the fire burning pa. Love
     
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    big thankz propheticNsyght.....Da ink stay wet & dripping
    just the color change at times from black to red to green
     
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    Very nice Rich,
    feeling this...^5
     
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