Black Poetry : Sonnet I

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by UrbanPoet, Dec 9, 2005.

  1. UrbanPoet

    UrbanPoet Active Member MEMBER

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    If you want a girl and you broke, you say
    can you let me holla for a dolla
    If she says no cuzz you aint no balla
    you tell her kiss *** and have a good day
    "you're just mad at me cuzz you aint paid"
    she'd say "you just mad cuzz you cant holla":argue:
    Tell her like Kanye and pop ya collar
    Tell her Gold Digger I'm tryna get laid
    but if you take up an ocupation
    work hard, that very first check will be bliss
    stay on ya game and buy some shoes, then
    you're worthy to get her salutation
    now she's all tied up, but remember this:luvv:
    When you ge bored go after her friend



    This is some stupid Petrachan sonnet that i had to write for a class in school
    It was kinda fun but a tad bit challenging.
    P.S. this has no signifigance to any past events
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Urbanpoet
    I really like your sonnet
    I enjoy the flow from the sonnet
    this was very cute :) *smiling*
    keep working that ink,,,it's very cool

    Much Love
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nicely done it speaks out for sure
    keep writting i enjoyed it.............
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You never know sometimes those assignments can bring forth pretty good pieces just like this one.
     
  5. UrbanPoet

    UrbanPoet Active Member MEMBER

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    thank you all
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet Piece Urban
    I know your peeps was like this
    Much Love Poet
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah best friend we all know about you and your adventures with sonnets and things of that nature. This was funny even though I didn't tell you taht in class.
     
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