Black Poetry : sonnet.......I dat hypnotized

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My mind is captive in the moment
    of bygones and age pass before
    a thousand of years yet only weeks
    past that left my thoughts in vision
    of the caressing beauty of she
    my keen reasons aim upon her skin
    silky soft tone chocolate of tasty
    relentless love
    I let my fancy heart place u there
    in my bed cross the sheets of a
    journey we pose souls through vision
    and dreams I know the only way is
    reality coz
    My heart & soul has hypnotized u
    but ya beauty has mesmerized me
    i can't stop stargazing in ya eyez
    and u can't seem to leave my arms
    of cressing comfort lay yo body
    closer to mines u are everything
    my mind had fantasized u to be
    ya smile is like a prized to be won
    and my love was captured in this
    captivity of desires
    I promise to soak up ya fears
    and dry the lonely tears
    and satisfy ya yearn u burn
    i gave my vow to protect u
    and cover u in warmth of essence
    the orbs of ya soul touch me
    i've prayed u never leave my side
    but if that what u claim and decide
    truely to be happy i'll let u leave
    hope someday in the next journey
    we meet heavenly bound skies
    but for now we fly together under
    the wingz of love in da name of love
    float my beloveth
    forth thy art my Queeneth
    in the eyez of thee father
    we was made to match
    and feel the glory of lovin hope
    it's so beautiful today coz u smile
    it feel so warm today coz u touched
    it seem to never end coz i treasure u
    deep in my heart where u remain
    i dat hypnotized :luvv: :luv: :luvv:
     
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    oh what can i say i havent said already
    this was so beautiful
    love the warm essence it flows with
    smooth Richie Rich....
    another for the wall...
    keep this up imma have
    to build another wall to hold
    these precious treasures
    of art you create
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lol..........thank u sistah Angel
    i have four walls empty
    and a bed ....!
     
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    Rich...this goin platinum lol I'm lovin it really the love is hypnotizin
     
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    Thankz sistah Sensual......i bring da heart of warmth mix wit vision
    and let the pen stroll.......wow platinummmmmmmmmmmm!!!
     
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    I have'nt felt like
    saying much all day
    but that was truly
    beautiful!
     
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    Thank u sistah purplemoons
    i was looking out the window today and visioning
    how it should be and this what came to mind
     
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    It's amazing
    sometimes how
    the mind can move
    the heart!
    Loving it!
     
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    yes when it start to run da heart flowz and the pen scribe the
    visional motions & moments of thoughts thankz sistah again
     
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    Yea, it can be like that, a vision of all that is meant to be, and all the possibilities within. This was so tender and beautiful....wow.
     
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