Quiet Poetry Lounge : Sonnet 1 ... New Vision

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Long ago you touch me
    I confess I am confused
    For I see this and I know
    But my heart tells me yes
    As you notice me troubles weigh
    The water as the air is clear
    I confess my love is true
    But what I see I can’t believe
    I feel and I can’t believe
    Why is this happening
    My heart says yes
    The unanswered truths
    Within unfolds…
    The love I feel I know its u
    So close to paradise
    Hidden in the waves of love
    Through a diamond
    Riding the sea
    My heart says yes
     
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    for thy temple a
    truth lay and abond
    a loveth for the
    heart speaks wisely
    the mind may river
    into the sea yet
    the embrace is anew
    the vision emboiled
    like a cornerstone wit
    reasons be not afraid
    of thy loveth and allow
    da showers to pour .....

    This was very well done and felt deeply
    ya pen have much to say i see ...........
     
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    thank you for da love n sweet words

    Angel
     
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    This is tender, and I think we can all relate. Nice job, sis.
     
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    most welcome sista this was awesomely laid out !!!!!
     
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    i'm still inside this sonnet sis....
     
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