Black Poetry : Songs for my lover

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  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...like something out of a movie
    Great Passion!
    ~Carpe Diem
    Everything I’ve ever desired to say
    But couldn’t find the words before
    Lavender linen spray
    & soft morning sunlight
    Drinking down the golden tint
    Of my…
    Deeply religious lover’s skin
    I love him
    Tight fisted and eloquent, all the same
    His sexual brilliance leaves me lame
    With fallen kimono
    In tandem with healed spirit
    My unending source of encouragement
    He is
    The remedy for my inner emptiness
    I am so “full” of love
    Sensual vocal marathons
    Fill the space of our home
    Warms the walls
    And keeps the fires burning long
    We are…God’s love song
    Priceless intimacy
    With almond kisses dipped in pink frosting
    Then drizzled over burning calve muscles
    …in the late of evening
    Amidst varying degrees of dominance and submission
    An unending siege of glorious connectedness
    Immersed in – implicit AM’s – & – explicit PM’s –
    And vice versa
    Soft screams of Dear God! My God!....Oooooooooh God!
    Braided with murmured incoherencies
    These things…have become my afternoon mantras with him
    ~ Melodically ~
    Bouncing off the sound of the city
    Whilst the sweet scent of our adoration
    Seems alive and breathing…
    As we exchange vows of trust, respect, and commitment
    …like something out of a movie
    or the perfect ending to a Pulitzer novel
    our love creates a ripple in time
    and awakens the cosmic silence
    of worlds beyond our own
    and we love…
    in warm persimmon tones
    upon the undisturbed surface of drops of dew
    spiritually serene and elevated

    He is…
    ………My Habit of the Heart

    He is…
    ………Not only my passion

    He is…
    ………My naked obsession

    and so I write, Songs for my lover!


    Copyright ©2006
     
  2. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats whats up Sage, love the piece it evokes imagenation.

    Mannie
     
  3. SmoovVerbiage

    SmoovVerbiage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "…like something out of a movie
    or the perfect ending to a Pulitzer novel
    our love creates a ripple in time
    and awakens the cosmic silence
    of worlds beyond our own"

    I love the feel of that verse

    It has been a while Sage,
    but this piece was worth
    the wait. Poetic pleasure
    in every sense.

    beautiful!

    SmoovV
    aka Cocobutterskyn
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can't say how nice it is to read you here again sage. This scribe is brimming with gorgeous imagery that lingers in our minds, and expressions of love that are genuine and vivid. Beautiful piece.
     
  5. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow,
    It's so good to have you back!
    I hope it's for the long haul!!!!!

    This piece is so sensual! It's so spritual!
    Sexy and smart!
    You are so gifted my sister!

    I always wanted to collab with you
    But I fear I couldn't keep up.

    peace and love
    twision
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Storm ...
    A big welcome back!
    Awesome piece ..
    it's good to see the storm in effect..thanks for the swell drop, again ...
    Welcome home Sis.:)
     
  7. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelicsage:
    This is so intimately beautiful. Your every word
    took me some where. Really enjoyed the read.

    Much Luv
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hotep Goddess Sage,

    What a piece of poetic excellence you have shared with us here. To much for me to pass on and not comment. Look forward to building with you later.

    Ase'
    G-Soulja
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Of course he is *giggling* I loved this piece/peace beginning to end and couldnt get enough of it :)
    But then again
    I know who loves it moooooreeee hehehehe
    Once again my brilliantly poetic penned sister you have outdone yourself
    just to set the bar for you to do it once again!
    I always knew you would be an acrobat ;)
    Love you
    Trin
     
  10. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So Vocal!
    So Sensual!!
    So Brilliant!!!
    So I'm shutting up cause my
    words can no longer describe the magnitue of this joint!
     
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