Quiet Poetry Lounge : song poem..#8

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deepy, Mar 11, 2004.

  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    we speak.....silences
    we laugh....silences
    we cry ...silences
    we know silences
    spaces of breath....spaces of air
    spaces of life
    saying more than words
    saying more than a word
    telling us of what we feel
    giving us a chance to know
    we love - silences
    we hate - silences
    we give - silences
    spaces fill our minds
    spaces in our life
    filled with all out thoughts
    filled with all our sighs
    our dreams
    our hopes
    our fears
    our loves
    music ...silences
    song...silences
    yes . silences, no..silences
    you...silences
    me....silences...
    silent
    WE
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So creatively posed, this song poem about the things in life that cause us to pause.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da song of silent reasons in all four seasons
    very nicely posed
     
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    Very creative message. Nice flow
     
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    This is very well thrown down, sis. I feel ya most def.
     
  6. deepy

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    thanks all of you..
    i feel you in the open spaces..
    in the dew..
    your energies push through
    helping me
    aiding me..
    in the silence...
     
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