Black Poetry : Song for the Newborn

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  1. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    She sleeps, and she does not know
    Of the uneasiness within me,
    Becoming this very moment.
    When I hold my breath,
    knowing what is to come
    and not knowing.

    Must I grind words on words on words?
    Or will the silence of my eyes
    Carry their full meaning into her heart.
    So that without speaking....

    The sun sets, both luminous and natural.
    As the swan places its trust in the lake.
    A light of galaxies springs forth of itself.
    Am I able to carry her thruout her life?

    Will she truly know her father's design for her?
    Will she truly know her father's undying love?

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I would say so yes she will knoweth of thy Father's love and his designing
    for her in time , this was felt deep as i think about my baby girl ...............
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Abstract, that was sooo beautiful. What an awesome write.
    Much Luv
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautifull........









    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH THIS WAS HEARTFELT AND JUST BEAUTIFUL. EXCELLENT WRITE CUZ.
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so beautiful!:spin:
     
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