Quiet Poetry Lounge : song bird sings

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Sep 23, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Little blue bird sing
    from da silent of night
    making compromises
    wit hype and fantasy
    a desire cast from da
    notes of melodies
    cascading deep into
    my soul of fire
    i hear the blue bird
    calling my name
    fom the depth of
    reasons from inside
    it's exsistance as it
    dance way to heart
    playin da harp of my
    soul singing sweet
    melodies
     
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    this was awesome...just made me melt....
    Richie Rich :love:
    little blue bird sing!!!!
    this had a calming agent with it
    likes the melody of this :kiss:
    LOVE the scribe!!!!!
    :hearts2:
     
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    This was so gentle and sweet...it was pretty Rich. So airy, and feathery soft, the blue bird sings, pulling at your heart strings, chirping a melody into your tune. This was so endearing, poet.
     
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    Light and oh so lovely, my dear. You always bring it right.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz so much angel for da visit in da sky

    thankz sistah watz for the warmth of da birdy

    thankz gempis for the sweet float above
     
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    it's amazing how anothers love
    can creep into your heart
    with a simple melody of love...

    Nice piece
     
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    and sage it's beautiful too thankz sis....
     
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    The reserve of modern assertions is sometimes pushed to
    extremes, in which the fear of being contradicted leads
    the writer to strip himself of almost all sense and meaning.
    thats what love does with a simple melody
    it strips us..and it can come as big as a bear
    or small as a blue bird.....nice drop poet...i see u flowing ....hookup
    :weights: :terrific:
     
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    sho nuff on point Hookup coz u know we as writer get deep into this
    maze of love that's electrical thankz man for the love on dis one
     
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