Black Poetry : ~*Sonata #1*~

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fresh fire.
    Desire.
    Whispering winds and I’m a
    father that must sire.
    There was something in me
    that needed to connect with something
    in you so that we could exist and
    be something...new.
    you called me from across time and space.
    For centuries before our birth, we danced and sang
    the same ancient tune.
    Breath of life...
    I breath and you're my wife.
    You breath and that
    fills me with more and more life.
    Poetic Love between two individuals meeting
    for the first time outside of time.
    Gazes locked and
    fresh fire evoked.
    Conjured love and sweet words dripping
    with honey, we spoke.
    I needed this assortment of feelings only
    you can make me feel;
    this assortment of colors only you can paint me in,
    this assortment of visions only you can make me see.
    In you, I’ve delved into the infinite possibilities that leave
    me breathless and raspy.
    You do something to me.
    Something unexplainable and unavoidable,
    but I love it!
    I love the scent, the feel, the thought and the touch of you.
    I love the love you emit and the way that it's always true.

    Copyright 2004
    ~Satin Prophesies aka 'Nigrescence'
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PropheticNsyght, you're always true!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this her was so deeply and felt on point and true
    i love the flava of it keep dropping it like dis wow !!
     
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    Such a beauty of love woven all through your words, this piece was simply laden with pure joy.
     
  5. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much love papi. I thank you for the support bruh.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Babyboi, Thank you. Words really can't begin to be expressed on how you make a brotha feel. Much love pa.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much love to you mama Watz.
    You are truly a blessing and you know what?
    I love you boo.

    One
     
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    ...Poet you give me the feeling of Sweet Death
    if there is even such...
    but I would say there is...as I resurrect merely to read you again...and
    everytime I read you..."I drown in your words"...
    all over again...

    Much love,
    Sage
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmm 'sweet death?' Now that made me feel infinitely good mami. Thank you so much for....just being you. I'm choked up right now! :bam: :bam:
     
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    tight flowing..nice read