Black Poetry : ...sometimes.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Mar 18, 2002.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved
     
  2. Tenay

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    Awesome!
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sherrie. ...umm... sis... calm down! this is MY poem
    ...rememba?? :lol: serious-ly! thanks for peepin' this.
    have i told you late-ly just how much i love you? :D

    Tenay. thanks a million for the read!! :)
     
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    Very well done. So thought-full Ms. Shyne. And yes, it boils down to your last few lines, sometimes....

    the fact that (regardless of the past)
    sometimes
    you’ll simp-ly love some people
    for life.


    Ask me how I know....

    thank you :heart:

    a
     
  5. Danilyn

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    OOOOOOO Girl! This was off the chain tight!
    I love it love it love it love it love it love it love it.

    Did I tell you I love it? Well, guess what!
    I LOVE IT! :lol: :)
     
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    Ahhhhhhh Yes...

    Sometimes we just love people for life
    Now that is nice!!
    I'm loving what u saying this morning my, sista!!
    Continue the Love...Love!!
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Elayne...

    Just where in the hell did you get such a tight *** mental???

    Can we flow together already????

    Dayuuummmm!!!!

    What's the hold up?????

    Serious piece BlakGurl!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    such truth in ya words SS.
    kinda like you speakin life insted of poetry.


    hw
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AlwaysThanksYa'll.


    Ga_Boi. life is poetry... & poetry is life. at least in my
    eyes... but i'ont know errythang. (just most thangs!) :D
    thanks sweetie... for stoppin' by! :heart:

    BigHead. although i practical-ly had to harrass you to
    read it... i'm glad you did! :D thank You!! :heart:

    Rashad. i promise i'll continue the Love... long as you
    keep reading me!! :) thanks darlin' for peepin' this one!

    Dani. you ain't just sayin' dat 'cause we sisters are ya?
    :lol: ... have i told you today how much i 'preciate cha?

    Sherrie. umm hmm... dats right! Love You!! (again) :D

    Alyce. how you know sis? well... when you let me know
    can you also let me know how to embrace the fact that it's
    true... ?? thanks for takin' the time!! :heart:
     
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    "...we got lost in this storm
    wondering/pondering/questioning
    where the hell we went wrong"

    Sometimes...it just beez like that...'til the next bee comes along to make your day blossom.

    beautiful PEACE.
     
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