Black Poetry : Sometimes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, May 29, 2009.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes
    I feel isolated
    I don’t mind

    Isolation is a reflecting time
    To work out the thoughts in mind

    But I find myself thinking
    About moments
    Of times gone by
    Of time with you
    The things you would do
    And the smiles we shared in each others lives

    Loneliness so deep is mine
    Is one maybe lonelier than me?
    I walk on the beach looking at sunsets
    Many nights that so lonely like you.

    My secret hearts desires
    Are behind hidden doors with keys

    I gave a few out in my life time
    But each holder ran off and left me

    I have one key that wasn’t given
    To unlock the deep treasure to find
    It is the apple of my eye, the key to unlock
    The mind, heart and the soul of me.
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    WHEW! I feel ya!

    I'm still holding on to one last key too.....with a DEATH GRIP! lol



    GREAT PIECE, HODEE!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully done brother lovin the flow ya pen is hot
     
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    Whats goin on in Tracy brother Hodee? :)

    Keep prayin.. ya never alone :)
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister Trinity
    I may be beyond hope.
    I love when you do a drive by! :geek:


    There is something in the Country Water.
    Would this make me a Valley Guy? :peace:

    Gots to get back to the City.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What I took from this piece, is the difference between being lonely, and taking time to look deeper into self. Getting in touch with self even more...what a beautiful trek to take.
     
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    hodee:
    Your never alone.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hodee:
    Your never alone.
    But I feel you sweetie.


    Much Luv
     
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